Transformations

Writing-Abandoned Places

Abandoned Places 

Weeks

Our learning goals are to:

-write a description, using powerful words and phrases

-include some Te Reo Māori

-carefully check that our sentences make sense and have correct punctuation and spelling.

Choose one of the images to prompt a piece of descriptive writing

The year is 2077 at the moment my country is in the middle of
a Deadly nuclear war and my Black OPS squad are on a
mission to recover some survivors from a vault in a city that
just got nuked. We have to wear Dark T44 power armour because
of the toxic radiation. We will have to be careful though because of
ferrel ghouls and Deadly blood dripping super mutants that will rip us
apart.  

It's time to drop now as we jump out of the fighter jet we feel like we’re birds
that are radiated and that are flying in the dark green gassy city. From a birds
eye view it looks abandoned. As I land it feels like I am in sinking sand. The city looks
like a huge 1km wide dump. 

As we go into one of the old rusty, damp and wet looking buildings we feel the
sides of the wall as if we were ancient people.  Then we saw a rusty looking door
that said KEEP OUT! So we shot down the door and found a whole room of ancient
drawings all over.  Me and my crew are starting to think that this city is not what we
thought it was... 

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