Hi Flynn it's Korban. I really enjoyed your interesting story about the scout camp that you participated in. I thought it was interesting but maybe next time you could try to not have repetitive words at the start of the sentences. You could also try and make your work more descriptive. Other than that I really enjoyed it.
Hi Flynn it's Korban. I really enjoyed your interesting story about the scout camp that you participated in. I thought it was interesting but maybe next time you could try to not have repetitive words at the start of the sentences. You could also try and make your work more descriptive. Other than that I really enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteHi Korban. Thanks for commenting on my Blog. I will use that imformation soon. Thanks again for commenting on my blog:D
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