WALT to write a poem that Use the five senses, Use some of these language features: onomapetia, rhyme, similie, metphor, alliteration and personifilation.
Great to see you completed your 'If I had wings poem.' I enjoyed seeing your sense of humour and interests coming through in your poem. Well done for working with me to go back and add some more language features. I liked your line, ' If I had wings I would look at the earth and look at the planes that lurk in the clouds..." I liked your use of the words lurk. Well done.
Kia ora Flynn
ReplyDeleteGreat to see you completed your 'If I had wings poem.' I enjoyed seeing your sense of humour and interests coming through in your poem. Well done for working with me to go back and add some more language features. I liked your line, ' If I had wings I would look at the earth and look at the planes that lurk in the clouds..." I liked your use of the words lurk. Well done.