Well done for using your writing skills to show some of your learning about wharenui and marae. I can see you have learnt some information about the basic structure of a wharenui and how marae can be important to a community. You have used some basic punctuation and started to think about paragraphs.
Your next step in writing is to add more detail which will allow you to have more in-depth information in your writing.
Kia ora Flynn
ReplyDeleteWell done for using your writing skills to show some of your learning about wharenui and marae. I can see you have learnt some information about the basic structure of a wharenui and how marae can be important to a community. You have used some basic punctuation and started to think about paragraphs.
Your next step in writing is to add more detail which will allow you to have more in-depth information in your writing.