Hi Flynn it's Charlie here. I read your post and I thought it was amazing! It was so interesting to read and it reminded me of Jack and the Beanstalk because it had a big giant and had very big feet. But there was one problem, the whole story didn't make sense. Some of the pictures that the words made me think of were weird because you added random pictures on the post. Maybe next time you can add in pictures related to the story but other than that it was cool and fun to read good bye
Hi Flynn it's Charlie here. I read your post and I thought it was amazing! It was so interesting to read and it reminded me of Jack and the Beanstalk because it had a big giant and had very big feet. But there was one problem, the whole story didn't make sense. Some of the pictures that the words made me think of were weird because you added random pictures on the post. Maybe next time you can add in pictures related to the story but other than that it was cool and fun to read good bye
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